help with engl assgn (3) due in 24 hours

due in 24 hours


Final Draft, Tattoo Writing Assignment 

Please submit the final draft of the first paragraph here.  You will need to save your paragraph as a Word document and upload the file here.

Before you submit your final draft, be sure to double-check the following.  These are the criteria I will be using to grade your work: 

Review Questions: 

1. Look at the topic sentence. Is it a complete sentence? Make sure that it’s not a fragment or written like a “title.”  For example, “Three reasons people get tattoos.” This would be a fragment. Instead, write: “There are three reasons people get tattoos.” This would be a complete sentence. 

2. Look for the first supporting point.  Could you find it easily? Is there a transition?  What is the transition? ____________________

Is there a specific example of this first reason people get tattoos? It should be a detailed description of a tattoo.  Remember, this is an exemplification paragraph, which means there must be specific examples of each supporting point. 

3. Now look for the second supporting point.  What is the transition?  _________________  If it’s missing, write one in. 

Is there a specific example for this supporting point?  Is there enough detail?  If no, suggest what could be added to make it “A-level specific.” 

4. Find the third supporting point. Transition?  _______________

Is there an interesting specific example of this final supporting point?  Does it need more detail?  Remember, specific writing is interesting writing!  Details like a person’s name can help your reader connect with your writing. 

5. Is there a conclusion sentence? 

6. Finally, edit your paragraph the best you can for any errors such as fragments, run-ons, or misspelled words. 

Email me if you have any questions.  

Journal #4 

Journal #4 Prompt:

If you could achieve anything in your life, what would it be? 

Remember to include interesting specific details. 

Type your journal in the MLA format.  You should have a heading with: your name, my name, the course and the date.   You should have a title, and the paragraph should be double spaced. 

Rough Draft for Customer Service Paragraph 

Narrative/Descriptive Writing Assignment 

Compile your information from the scratch outline submitted last week  and create it into a rough draft. The length for this assignment is 
ten grammatically correct sentences, and it will need to be typed in MLA format. (Review previous modules for help with MLA formatting).  

Submitting the paper: 

1. Make sure you have saved your document
in Word format. 
2. Click on the assignment link. 
3. Click on the Browse button. 
4. Select the file you want to send and double-click on the file name so that
it appears in the Browse area. 
5. Click on the Submit (NOT the Save) button and your file is on its way to
your instructor.

Doe 2

Jane Doe

Instructor’s Name


18 Aug. 2021

Terrible Dining Experience

My dinner experience at Jillian’s Home Cooking was the worst customer service experience ever due to the servers, the atmosphere, and the cleanliness. First, our server was not friendly or helpful. She didn’t introduce herself, took ten minutes to bring drinks, and brough us the wrong order. When we told her that our order was not right, she said, “Oh well,” and kept walking. Then, we noticed that the atmosphere was not appropriate. The music was too loud, and we could not hear each other talk. The restaurant also had TVs throughout the store with different channels that were blaring sound. The worst part about our experience was the lack of sanitation. Even though the employees were wearing masks, the masks looked filthy, and we saw a bug in the corner of the restaurant. Our experience was terrible at Jillian’s Home Cooking because of the poor service, the environment, and the lack of sanitation.

Revision and Editing

Taking the Next Steps in Your Paper

Differences Between Revision and Editing
Revision- (re)examines the writing as a whole to see what can make it stronger. You look at the writing with a new focus or perspective. Consequently, you make larger changes as you revise.
Editing- You are looking for typos, such as a duplicate word or a misspelling. When writers edit, they must go line by line to find these errors.

Four Key Areas to revise for include:
Sentence Skill

Examine the topic sentences to see if they state the main idea of the paragraph. The reader should know the paragraph’s main point after having read the topic sentence.
For a paragraph to be unified, all details should support that single point stated in the topic sentence.

All details in the paragraphs should support the main idea/topic sentence.
The support or evidence should also be developed enough to convey the main idea.
The evidence should be specific and enough.

You will examine how well the paragraph is organized. It should be in a clear, logical order.
Moreover, see where transitions and connecting words are used. You then need to see where they need to be added to link your thoughts.

Transitions to Help with Coherency:

Illustration or Examples

For instance

For example

In like manner
In contrast

Such as

To illustrate



Transitions serve as a bridge to connect ideas between paragraphs and sentences. They allow the reader to see your thought process and how your ideas connect so they do not have to read between the lines. As a result, consider the relationship between your ideas.

Sentence Skills
Major errors should be corrected during revision.
These major errors include but are not limited to:
Subject-Verb Agreement
Use of slang
As you learn and practice these key sentence skills throughout the term, your revisions will become stronger.

Revising Using A.R.M.S.
Revising your Draft: ARMS
words, sentences, details, citations, signal phrases (transitions)
words, sentences, details
sentences to fit better, thesis, word order
Overused words (“things, stuff, cool”), plain words, flat sentences
***Following these can help with revising unity, support, coherency, and sentence skills.

Revising and Editing Sentence Skills
Editing your draft: CUPS
First words in sentences, proper nouns, titles
Does it make sense? Are words used correctly? Is it clear? 
Use commas after signal phrases, periods after citations, quotation marks around direct quotes. 
Do not just use spell check. Read your work aloud and use a dictionary!






Calculate the price of your order

Select your paper details and see how much our professional writing services will cost.

We`ll send you the first draft for approval by at
Price: $36
  • Freebies
  • Format
  • Formatting (MLA, APA, Chicago, custom, etc.)
  • Title page & bibliography
  • 24/7 customer support
  • Amendments to your paper when they are needed
  • Chat with your writer
  • 275 word/double-spaced page
  • 12 point Arial/Times New Roman
  • Double, single, and custom spacing
  • We care about originality

    Our custom human-written papers from top essay writers are always free from plagiarism.

  • We protect your privacy

    Your data and payment info stay secured every time you get our help from an essay writer.

  • You control your money

    Your money is safe with us. If your plans change, you can get it sent back to your card.

How it works

  1. 1
    You give us the details
    Complete a brief order form to tell us what kind of paper you need.
  2. 2
    We find you a top writer
    One of the best experts in your discipline starts working on your essay.
  3. 3
    You get the paper done
    Enjoy writing that meets your demands and high academic standards!

Samples from our advanced writers

Check out some essay pieces from our best essay writers before your place an order. They will help you better understand what our service can do for you.

  • Analysis (any type)
    Advantages and Disadvantages of Lowering the Voting Age to Thirteen
    Undergrad. (yrs 1-2)
    Political science
  • Coursework
    Undergrad. (yrs 1-2)
    Business Studies
  • Essay (any type)
    Is Pardoning Criminals Acceptable?
    Undergrad. (yrs 1-2)
    Criminal Justice

Get your own paper from top experts

Order now

Perks of our essay writing service

We offer more than just hand-crafted papers customized for you. Here are more of our greatest perks.

  • Swift delivery
    Our writing service can deliver your short and urgent papers in just 4 hours!
  • Professional touch
    We find you a pro writer who knows all the ins and outs of your subject.
  • Easy order placing/tracking
    Create a new order and check on its progress at any time in your dashboard.
  • Help with any kind of paper
    Need a PhD thesis, research project, or a two-page essay? For you, we can do it all.
  • Experts in 80+ subjects
    Our pro writers can help you with anything, from nursing to business studies.
  • Calculations and code
    We also do math, write code, and solve problems in 30+ STEM disciplines.

Frequently asked questions

Get instant answers to the questions that students ask most often.

See full FAQ
  • Is there a possibility of plagiarism in my completed order?

    We complete each paper from scratch, and in order to make you feel safe regarding its authenticity, we check our content for plagiarism before its delivery. To do that, we use our in-house software, which can find not only copy-pasted fragments, but even paraphrased pieces of text. Unlike popular plagiarism-detection systems, which are used by most universities (e.g., we do not report to any public databases—therefore, such checking is safe.

    We provide a plagiarism-free guarantee that ensures your paper is always checked for its uniqueness. Please note that it is possible for a writing company to guarantee an absence of plagiarism against open Internet sources and a number of certain databases, but there is no technology (except for itself) that could guarantee no plagiarism against all sources that are indexed by turnitin. If you want to be 100% sure of your paper’s originality, we suggest you check it using the WriteCheck service from and send us the report.

  • I received some comments from my teacher. Can you help me with them?

    Yes. You can have a free revision during 7 days after you’ve approved the paper. To apply for a free revision, please press the revision request button on your personal order page. You can also apply for another writer to make a revision of your paper, but in such a case, we can ask you for an additional 12 hours, as we might need some time to find another writer to work on your order.

    After the 7-day period, free revisions become unavailable, and we will be able to propose only the paid option of a minor or major revision of your paper. These options are mentioned on your personal order page.

  • How will I receive a completed paper?

    You will get the first version of your paper in a non-editable PDF format within the deadline. You are welcome to check it and inform us if any changes are needed. If everything is okay, and no amendments are necessary, you can approve the order and download the .doc file. If there are any issues you want to change, you can apply for a free revision and the writer will amend the paper according to your instructions. If there happen to be any problems with downloading your paper, please contact our support team.
  • Where do I upload files?

    When you submit your first order, you get a personal account where you can track all your orders, their statuses, your payments, and discounts. Among other options, you will have a possibility to communicate with your writer via a special messenger. You will be able to upload all information and additional materials on your paper using the “Files” tab on your personal page. Please consider uploading everything you find necessary for our writer to perform at the highest standard.
See full FAQ

Take your studies to the next level with our experienced specialists

Live Chat+1 (857) 777-1210 EmailWhatsApp